It is often aruged that the post graduation study should be free with no link of economic level for each and every person.There is wide spread worry that it would lead myriad of concerns in one's life. In my opinion this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
Immense of arguments in favour of the aforementioned.The most preponderant one is that the it contribute to increase literacy level of society. To extent it, sometimes some poor people dropout their study owing to lack of money and vanish out their thoughts toward their goals.Altough they are good at study's but due to family circumstances they have to quit their studies but if the education at University level is free so they can achieve thier destination of life. To exemplify it,the survey conducted by the government of Japan, in 2015 in order to improve education rate in their country shows that free higher education after graduation plays key role in this field.
What is more, the free education can help people to gain extra knowledge. To elaborate it, it makes the society techno savvy because it help the person to move with the flow of modern epoch.For instance, study results published by government of Australia in May 2012 and March 2014 clearly indicate that the free education not only make the nation better but also improve their life style in order to educate them about their spic and span life. Therefore, it is clear that why some are in favour of this.
On other hand, a section of society contradicts the above-said view.They pondered that by providing free education the burden will get increase and the other developments in society will not complete. For example, the money spend on students education can make the children irrespective towards the responsibility but also surge stress on government's bank balance.
In conclusion, it is clear that Although the university education without expenses can made some burden to the authorities but their benefits to develop society are cruical.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02710843373 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77412581908 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6638245024 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.727272727 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162104637894 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645049733396 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041463964072 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893898182281 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213220366943 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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