University students are increasingly studying abroad as of their studies. Do the advantages abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays number of students studies in different countries and this is increasingly becoming popular. Dispite the fact that studyng abroad will help students to got to their favourite subject easier which in their optien but faver this might have worse effects on their ethical because they do not live with their parents and they are alone. In my opinion students which they studies abroad had a pleasant experience after one year of living far frome their families they handled this problem.
studying abroad will help students to get to their favoribe subject which they can improve themselves better to reach their goal the reason is if the student is interested in medical they have to apply for that contry for improve themselves. For example when one of my family members informed me that he was not interested in country which he was studied there because the the country that he applied for medical was industrial country and they was not strict about medicals and afber he changed his country he was happy and after six years of studying he is the best doctor in that country. These options are have to be choose strictly for their life to reach to their goal.
The main challeng that studends will face while they are at different country for studying is ethics and depression . this problem has negative effects on students and they can not focus on studying and this is quite scary. For instance , one of my family members that did nof had any kean on the country thet he went at first year he was depressed and when he changed the country he was getting out of that depression .
Most of the students studies abroad and this is increasingly favorable. Although studying in di different countries will help students to reach their goal and also have a bad effects for number of students that they can not handle the depression problem when they ane alone and far from family In my opinion, the experience of studying abroad more advantages then than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80938416422 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40153405261 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2470083286 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.090909091 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234368431749 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133869211946 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973000224948 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183373046158 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105093350027 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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