The use of cars has increased
Nowadays people for preference to the private vehicle's because it has an easiest source for them and they can go from one place to another at any time.Although, in the few years, the ownership of car is increasing which release obnoxious gases on the environment.Therefore, before arriving on decision I will be discuss these views in upcoming paragraphs. Firstly,discuss why people want to get their own personal car.First of all, it is a time-consuming process for them and they can easily go anywhere which creates a traffic jams in cities and released a harmful gases on the environment.Furthermore, in the urban areas there has only single lane road in which all types of vehicles are driven by the people therefore , create a traffic jams in the cities. Moving further, the government should impose a stringent laws so ,that overcome the problem of traffic jams in the city.Moreover, authorities should applaud the masses to more use of public transportation and give more opportunities to them so that they don't get difficulties in the public vehicles like a the number of buses and trains as soon as they go at time on their destinations and they discourage the folks to more use of private vehicle's. In the conclusion,although the cars has become more helpful to the people however we cannot ignore these determine tak effect which impact on the society as well as management should impose strict laws so that they encourage the masses to use public vehicles.
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- The use of cars has increased 63
- Some people believe that technology has made men more sociable and other think that it has made us less sociable
- Nowadays technology has become debatable issue among people because few masses think that technology is increasing day by day and it has become people more sociable However other opine that technology has become less to individuals Therefore before arrivi
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people fro using their cars 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9674796748 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35625332695 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3407317036 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 305.5 106.682146367 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5 20.7667163134 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.25 7.06120827912 343% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156265072107 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885488639429 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333789939249 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156265072107 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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