The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The way we talk to one another has evolved along with our state-of-the-art technological advancements. Despite certain potential drawbacks, I'm confident that social networking's positives would outweigh them.
First of all, virtual connections would strengthen relationships among people, especially with their families, relatives, and friends. For example, if our family members live abroad, suffocated applications such as Skype or Zoom could be used to interact with each other. Therefore, time would not be an issue because we can spend time with relatives and friends because by using online tools people can converse with each other, anytime and anywhere. Secondly, online conversations would avoid the spreading of contaminated diseases. COVID-19, for instance, is a dangerous disease that currently affects humanity. Thus, people would not be allowed to come out of their houses, and social media would be a tool for solving communication issues.
Although virtual connection has many merits for human life, it can also bring about detrimental issues such as social and cultural corruption. Namely, as for social issues,
people would not realize that they spend more time on gadgets than face-to-face interaction. As a result, people would lack socialization due to obsessive interaction online.
In conclusion, I believe that online conversation would bring more merits than demerits to individuals and society. People should be encouraged to use this modern tool for modern life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70535714286 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01186800043 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2465216348 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159234251974 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565550202212 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055257494446 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939036383466 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636726821654 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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