The use of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century.
Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, an increasing of use of social media is growing stronger. We are not strangers to Facebook, Twitter yet, and of course this situation has two sides of it, too. While its benefit bring for us to easy to keep in touch with family, stay up date the news, but the its drawback as well as effect to growing up of children.
Firstly, we need to admit that there are plenty of useful things about social media which are so much convenient in ordinary life. It is not too hard to contact someone like my family or my friends. For instance, when our parents or someone belongs to relatives get the bad problems, we can get urgent calls of their about some those crucial issues and their location as well, or when we need to discuss an outing, like what we eat for dinner, where we go, or ask them out someday, we just make a call or send a message, and they will respond, so that it doesn't take a long time for us to know the answers. Secondly, it has access to new information quickly. How much information will be released in a day, and how do we update it? We need through on social media, where the newest news are always posted, from politics, education, sports, etc. If we want to find or read information of entertainment, we can access pages such as Twitter, Facebook, etc. And it shows all those of news about topics we are interested in, so we will save a little money to buy newspapers like before.
However, it still exists disadvantages that can affect directly to children who are unaware of what it is and gradually fall victim to these harmful. Accessing social networks too soon leads to a natural shortage of skills. Typically as many children claim the phone while they are eating or before going to bed, and they gradually talk less with people, maybe even with their parents, which is one of the most essential skills in their life afterward.
In conclusion, usage of social media is still very necessary for our life in order to reach useful information or contact immediately with our beloved ones. But we need to limit the bad sides of it. Don't let them control us, let them become the thing that we own, and it needs to support us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Typically,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45707070707 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40142221193 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.8798366094 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.823529412 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102260676724 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415486344582 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456177766535 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655608474112 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315069982566 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.