Using a computer every day can have more negative effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?
Since technology was improved, more and more individuals including teenagers have been working with their electronic gadgets. Meanwhile, there has been a debating discussion between people about these devices’ effects particularly on children. Despite all the good aspects, I myself completely concur with the group of people whom have thought of them as tools which have more harmful effects.
First of all, when it comes to computers’ adverse causes, the main fact that they have been used for various tasks as helpful devices, should not be overlooked. But on the other hand, they have modified human’s habits and put them in a critical health condition. In other words, enforcing people to sit down all day and also have made them to spend their time only by working with them not by exercising, can be one of the worst consequences. This has led children to have issues such as overweight or obesity and diabetes. As a result, all the people even young ones have been suffering from many health issues through their lifespan.
Additionally, diverse sorts of information have been uploaded on the internet which could include sexuality or violence subjects. This kind of environment could have lots of horrible effects on teens. Furthermore, by reading or watching some contents which has included violence, they may be stimulated to do actions like them even though they may be aware of their bad causes. Moreover, they have been confronted by much inappropriate topics which could be annoying or confusing such as nudity or crime ones.
In conclusion, although nobody could be able to underestimate these gadgets’ worthy facts, they have had several drawbacks which has affected especially on youngsters. These bad effects are range from health problems to watch some irrelevant content for their age while they have been searching for their interesting ones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23841059603 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72033118306 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9473915848 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176838760659 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066264080504 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279913172987 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107091274908 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436017588959 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.