Violence in playgrounds is increasing. However, it is important that parents should teach children not to hit back at bullies.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, violence in schools and playgrounds seems to increase. The issue is that parents need to deal with the way they educate their children in bully. this essay will support the points of view with examples.
Many people hold the view that violence must be prohibited in schools. they say this because they understand how painful an injury of a bully brings to children, especially a mental one. people should promote anti-bullying policies in schools and playgrounds and support the victims as soon as possible. As a result, children can be secure against the bully.
There is a common belief that parents have to have the right way to teach their children about school violence. because a child always sets their parents as an example which means all violent actions of a child are all from their parents or the habitats they are living in. parents not only should teach their children about violence and its consequences but also about the way to protect themselves from the bully. Therefore, none of the children will suffer from violence at schools.
violence among children is increasing in modern days and it is necessary to educate children not to revenge at bullies. I agree with the latter opinion. Personally, I take the view that children of every age need to learn about violence and protect themselves from the bully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04424778761 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51355476436 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517699115044 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.113765819 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4285714286 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197818285878 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705085768958 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508478686283 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118751451474 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415777538698 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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