Visual pollution is the major cause of accidents on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Visual pollution is the major cause of accidents on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Visual pollution occurs when an individual cannot enjoy the view in a particular area due to negative changes in a natural environment. Has visual pollution major efforts for accidents? I agree up to a point but that's partly true.
The first step is to understand why visual pollution occurs? Broadly speaking, there are many reasons for this. First and foremost reason is Bill boards. For instance, Bill boards can be seen every now and then have been supported to diverting drivers. These strategies involve limiting of signboards and Bill boards on major highways.
Furthermore, some time of urban palaces do not have control over what is created and assembled in common place. Nowadays some time a lot of building work taking place and the architecture is relatively moderate and they are using glass for developing attractive building.
So when drivers can drive in sunny days. Once in a while glass reflection on drivers eyes that time can occurs accidents.
In conclusion, there are variety of answers for this question. But if government can take responsibility to decrease the visual pollution. When government passes some laws regarding visual pollution then stop the visual pollution in our country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, while, broadly speaking, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19897959184 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76650606543 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658163265306 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7432487447 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9333333333 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186990835002 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628408977995 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847799210893 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948379296443 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776931778806 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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