we cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent da you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people be leve that we stould rot help people n other countries as long as there are problems n cur own suciety. I disayree with this view because 1 believe Uhat we should try to help as mary people as possiole.
On the one hand, I eccept thet it is important to help our neighbcurs ard fellow citizens. In mɔst communi possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerred about this crotlem, there are usually opportunicies to volunteer time or give money to support these people In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving tree food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorster. ard there are ɔbvicus ways to help, I can understanc why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity. ere are people who are impoverished ar disadvantaged in some way.
At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who ive teyond our Inetional burders. In some coutries Uhe probler is hat people face are much nore serious ha those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to nelp. For example, when children are dying from curable d seases in Africen countries, govermments and irdivicuals in richer countries can save ives smply hy paying for vaccines that alreacy exis. A small donation to ar international crarity might have a much gieater mpact thar helping in our local area.
In conclusion,it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in own opinion national boundaries should not stop us fram nelping thosc who cre in noed.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-29 | pratik.dadhaniya | 67 | view |
- Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers. 56
- In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. What has caused this ? What solutions can you suggest ? 61
- we cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent da you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- People want their country to host an international sporting events. Other believes that international sporting event bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both the points of view and give your opinion. 73
- As countries have developed, there has been a trend towards smaller family size. Why does this happen ? How does this affect the society? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people be leve that we stould rot h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to help as mary people as possiole. On the one hand, I eccept thet it is imp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerred about this crotlem, there are...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to serving tree food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorster. ard t...
^^
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ard
...n. As the problems are on our doorster. ard there are ɔbvicus ways to help, I can u...
^^^
Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ere
...hat we should prioritise local charity. ere are people who are impoverished ar disa...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rished ar disadvantaged in some way. At the same time, I believe that we have...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...we have an obligation to help those who ive teyond our Inetional burders. In some c...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pact thar helping in our local area. In conclusion,it is true that we cannot ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ocal area. In conclusion,it is true that we cannot help everyone, b...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62141640713 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8863825436 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235471119002 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923855857599 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064896768714 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1588666753 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527003333597 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.