We should encourage young people to visit different countries as it could bring many benefits to them. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people nowadays travel to variety countries to study or to experience life. From my point of view, I totally agree that a journey to different countries significantly advantage youth.
Firstly, young people will learn, research and experience a great deal about many different cultures. It is evident that cultural diversity exists even in one country; however, that difference is shown more distinctly between countries, for example in language, history or religion. Every country has its advantages and disadvantages in many aspects, directly experience those pros and cons will gain their knowledge on multiple sides of life quickly. From those points, people will be easy to adapt globalisation, which is the main tendency nowadays.
Besides, encountering obstacles and difficulties are inevitable when entering foreign places; through the challenges young people might face, they experience self-training, which is the most efficient approach to enhance their skills; that is because they are forced to develop new abilities to adapt foreign situations. For example, communication in general, and language in particular, people will have many chances to demonstrate their ideas to other individuals who speak different languages; hence, their communication skill and also their confidence will be extremely improved. Moreover, travelling is an excellent opportunity to grow networks; people might have new incredible valuable connections during their journey.
In conclusion, it is true that travelling abroad contains many obstructions; however, its life-long personal benefits are indisputable; people should take advantage of youth to have new experiences in new environments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90650406504 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09472428419 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8158405687 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.3 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178089500711 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778648582027 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460608013417 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121249632845 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398853832442 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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