Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that rich nations such as the US and the UK should let more refugees in and support them with basic needs including food and shelter. This essay agrees with this statement because this benefits both the refugees themselves and the country of destination.
Wealthy nations should accept more refugees because this can protect the most fundamental right of all: the right to live. Turning our backs to the refugees could be fatal for them in most cases since they have no food to eat, nowhere to stay, and no legal rights on the new land. Instead, if the government accepted and helped them with basic assistance such as two meals a day and a place to sleep at night, they could be able to survive and start to build a new life in the country that they have risked their lives to reach. For example, in the 2015 migrant crisis in Europe, at least 50,000 lives were saved by the Greek government after it decided to open its border for asylum seekers from Africa and the Middle East.
Another reason why more refugees should be accepted by rich countries is that this could create more jobs for the host country. It is known that migrants engage in entrepreneurship at much higher rates than natives since the act of migrating is associated with risk-taking behavior. Thus, migrants are more likely to take risks in business, such as starting a new company. By creating new businesses, they also create new jobs for everyone including natives. For example, in the US, although migrants are only 15% of the population, they represent 25% of entrepreneurs and create 1.5 million new jobs every year.
In conclusion, rich nations should let more refugees in because this not only protects the right to live of the refugees but also helps the host country expand its job market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73801916933 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41041133031 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0435825647 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267062013799 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104363619124 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868135880087 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180787145126 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681868845534 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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