As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether apart from concentrating on the main purpose which is to create profits, business should not neglect other social aspects. This essay will completely approve of this viewpoint.
In fact, some businesses have to take the responsibilities of social perspectives owing to several reasons. Chief among these is that as well as making money, corporations should also focus on their workforce instead of exploiting them excessively to maximise the company’s profits. In other words, businesses can increase their workers’ satisfaction by improving work facilities or providing numerous infringe benefits at work, which can encourage the workers to produce more productivity as well as profits for them. If the business only requires their employees to make as much money as possible, gradually, a huge quantity of them may quit their jobs due to the heavy workload. Consequently, instead of achieving better results, these companies are likely to suffer from a significant decrease in productivity or even go out of business due to a lack of workforce.
Another noticeable rationale behind my idea is that beside businesses’ primary financial aim, they also need to take notice of environmental impacts. In truth, numerous businesses have a tendency to neglect some issues relating to the environment. Some paper corporations, for example, exploit the natural resources and chop down a huge number of trees for their manufacturing and have no possible measures to conserve the ecosystem. This practice can result in adverse problems, such as nature degradation or even global warming, which can severely damage the environment and human beings as a whole. Thus, caring about these environmental issues is mandatory to businesses in terms of sustaining society.
In conclusion, because of numerous aforementioned demerits of ignoring social duties, I believe that businesses should focus on these aspects as well as creating profits.
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- Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries What are the advantages and disadvantages of this 78
- As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se aspects as well as creating profits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54304635762 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10174950032 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619205298013 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2426069575 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201573460342 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706604994716 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537338225919 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110970424058 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509222066933 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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