In today's world, It is generally believed that business has been more popular recently. Some people argument profits are vital for companies. However, I partly disagree that the idea, they also should have social responsibilities.
On the one hand, there are a few reasons why I accept that businesses focus on making money. In fact, companies need to apply to afford many sources such as employee payments, and transportation expenses. Moreover, profits from customers could need to prepare several things including improving the materials facilities and expanding their market. Another reason is companies do advertisements for the promotion of the product to attract consumers. For example, if an own business doesn't have campaign marketing, the product would not be sell product and affect the community.
On the other hand, there are more compelling reasons why I firmly believe that industries should take social responsibility. First of all, society is a place where businesses aim and develop. Companies can contribute to money charity organizations or through taxes when the government uses taxes for the development of infrastructure and the education system. Secondly, these companies would have the trust of customers as they create good impressions for users, which helps them to grow their business comprising community and reputation in society.
To sum up, although I accept that industries are value-making money, I am firmly convinced that social responsibility is necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 482, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, such as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53711790393 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07633785816 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659388646288 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2566661364 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206579209641 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663564389711 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636966130993 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12836211402 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334364961244 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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