As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Besides making profits to operatea company, some people believe that businesses also embrace social responsibilities. Personally, I totally with this idea and will outline in the essay below.
On the one hand, a company needs to cover its running costs so that it can operate their work smoothly and effectively. For example, on a monthly basis, my organization has to pay a large amount of money for salaries, rent and electricity. Furthermore, companies which are struggling for financial resources hardly make a contribution to society due to the fact that the main concern is how to overcome ther financial difficulties, unless they would be on the verge of going bankrupt. Therefore, if businesses want to share their finance, they should make sure that they are in good finance.
On the other hand, being socially responsible is a great way to enhance their comany's brand and attract more customers. For instance, more people choose Colgate not only their high-quality products but also improving their health and education around the world. Moreover, companies that only focus on maximizing their profits without having more social responsibilities are unlikely to maintain business. Vedan, for example, is a good case in point, many supermarkets do not sell its products because it contaminates the Thi Vai river with a huge amount of harmful substances, which have a severe impact on people living in this area.
In conclusion, each of comanies should be responsible for both environment protection and increasing the unemployment rates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...great way to enhance their comanys brand and attract more customers. For instance...
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... and increasing the unemployment rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32520325203 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01837411951 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0368389096 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155507257318 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056690566572 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497958189239 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871205270048 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382096894463 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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