Having older people at home could be both of advantage and disadvantage. It all depends upin the circumstances and the situations you are under or facing at the moment.
In my opinion having someone elderly at home is of great use, especially for couples who work and have infants and toddlers to be taken care after . Most of the times the day cares and kindergarten charges really exorbitantly which is impossible for parents to afford 25 days a week, so if you are lucky enough to have some elderly person at home who is willing to look after your young one is a blessing in disguise. Moreover he or she takes care of your belongings in your absence aswell which is a total win situation. Because of which you can easily and freely carry on with your day. Further they help you in you daily household chores aswel by lending you hand in cooking, baking and groceries shopping, also you always have a company at home which is very useful for venting out or in case of any expert opinion.
On the other hand there are some of the disadvantages as well el to this arrangement as well. Sometimes they need to taken care of because of their old age which can be time consuming for us, keeping in mind our demanding jobs and kids, so it, to some extent adds an extra responsibility upon your shoulders. Like kids they are also to be known to throw tantrums every now and then on trivial matters. You never know when they get upset and starts affecting their health because of that. They also acts like children in most of the cases, therefore it becomes difficult, at times impossible for us to sort the situation which results in us losing our temper as well to which we feel sorry later and regret it.
So, the advantages and disadvantages of having old people in lives go hand in hand. So, it is upon us tweak the situation in manner to benifit us all to every possible extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ants and toddlers to be taken care after . Most of the times the day cares and kin...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ur young one is a blessing in disguise. Moreover he or she takes care of your belongings...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...pinion. On the other hand there are some of the disadvantages as well el to this arrang...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[5]
Message: Did you mean 'take'?
Suggestion: take
...ngement as well. Sometimes they need to taken care of because of their old age which ...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... are also to be known to throw tantrums every now and then on trivial matters. You never know when...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'act'
Suggestion: act
...their health because of that. They also acts like children in most of the cases, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48837209302 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47350165959 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.851075732 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157292007062 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690864862665 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116406912807 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130260872279 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843989512766 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.