What are the advantages and disadvantages of social networking?
In our modern world, the internet is one of the most helpful tools which makes our life much easier. People nowadays use social networks not only to entertain but also to connect with the world.
There are many advantages of social networking. Firstly, using social networks, especially Facebook, means we can keep in touch with friends and family in a convenient way. If we have relatives in another area, even another country, we can keep in contact using Facebook, Twitter, etc. Social networking helps people pass on the news. The internet is always updating. You can easily get breaking news just by clicking on the websites. In addition, when a new story breaks, social websites help us hear the experience and opinions of the people where the news is happening. Last but not least, surfing the social network is a popular form of entertainment. Sitting on the sofa with one of your smart devices and you can see a whole new world on the internet. There are tons of funny videos, photos and stories that people post every day on their own social account. Those things really help you to relax because they are incredible.
Social networking is good but everything has its dark side. It also has some disadvantages. According to a study, about 70% of the world population is using at least one type of social media. It means there are various types of people on the internet, include bad guys with dangerous thinking. Nobody knows the true identity of some of the people using social websites. Therefore, sometimes people think they're talking online to someone friendly but it might be a dangerous stranger. Furthermore, social networking can be addictive, especially in young people. It has tons of fabulous things that make you laugh but also make you addicted. Young people might spend too much time on social media compared to other activities.
Those are some good sides and some dark sides of using social websites. To enjoy it all, you should learn how to spend time on social networking effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a convenient way" with adverb for "convenient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n keep in touch with friends and family in a convenient way. If we have relatives in another area, ...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...king. Nobody knows the true identity of some of the people using social websites. Therefore...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...ites. Therefore, sometimes people think theyre talking online to someone friendly but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, as to, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87755102041 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52756396327 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9463200951 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7083333333 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2916666667 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225803858118 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785416337869 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870446313478 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145928016157 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308228788201 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.