All of us know that if a person want to be a good manager it is difficult to be be because you must to work hard to be a successful boss. In my opinion to be a good leader you have to be responsible about your team and work and to think lot of before you do any thing.Also, we can not forget you must be lovable and cooperative. Now I will discuss all of them.
Firstly, all of managers want to make their job in perfect way. so, they must to make a great team to work together this is the one thing every body must think about it this is will make their work finish quickly and easily. For example, one day my teacher want from me to do a science presentation when I started to do it I was no tine to complete it alone after that, I call my friend and said to them "can you came to me and help me in my presentation".However, in the day of presentation I did it and it was perfect I remember in this presentation I get a full mark.
Furthermore, now a days we have lot of famous companies if we think about it we will say of course their boss is a responsible man because of it if he did not like this kind of person they were can not able to succeed with this great success.Also, they must think lot of before do any thing because may be they will find a big problem if they did not think about all the things that they might encounter.
In addition,they must be merciful and helpful. When I was child my dad tell my that" if you will be a leader in on day in the future you must help and have mercy with your team because maybe in the one day the God will make you need them so your relationship with them should be a friendship, not a manager with his employees".In the other hand, you must not be lenient in the work. You must present the work because if you are lenient in it, you will not succeed.
In conclusion, every one can be a manager but the must important thing is to be a fruitful manager. Because if you are not successful in your job, you do not need to be called a manager.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...to be a good manager it is difficult to be be because you must to work hard to be a s...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...er it is difficult to be be because you must to work hard to be a successful boss. In m...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... work and to think lot of before you do any thing.Also, we can not forget you must be lov...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...to think lot of before you do any thing.Also, we can not forget you must be lovable ...
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Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... want to make their job in perfect way. so, they must to make a great team to work...
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Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...make their job in perfect way. so, they must to make a great team to work together this...
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Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...me and help me in my presentation'.However, in the day of presentation I did it an...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...tation I get a full mark. Furthermore, now a days we have lot of famous companies if we t...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...on I get a full mark. Furthermore, now a days we have lot of famous companies if we t...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canned'.
Suggestion: canned
... not like this kind of person they were can not able to succeed with this great suc...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...able to succeed with this great success.Also, they must think lot of before do any t...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
....Also, they must think lot of before do any thing because may be they will find a big pro...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...hink lot of before do any thing because may be they will find a big problem if they di...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... that they might encounter. In addition,they must be merciful and helpful. When I wa...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... not a manager with his employees'.In the other hand, you must not be lenient...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you do not need to be called a manager.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 7.85571142285 331% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 24.0651302605 307% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.0425 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71882212548 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.3925 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.901600159 49.4020404114 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0204842553203 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0113661214487 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202172703929 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171538014233 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172033168898 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 50.2224549098 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.74 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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