What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
In this modern era, Huge amount of population has been buying needy stuff from outside of their country via internet. However, There may some benefits along with the drawbacks for local farms as well as residence. In this essay we will contrast both and provide solution, how can we encourage to spend money on their country's goods.
Firstly, Spending money on item from another country and it would be beneficial for a person. For instantiate, my friend ordered a game which is not made in his home country and then he found it google. For another example, china is known as a advance and developing country about technology. Some companies adapt Chinese advance machinery to make their work easier.
Secondly, Product bought from another country may not have grantee or warranty although, it makes other country's economy strong and that is not right for home town. For instance, When a person pay money outside which is directly reach other country's government in the form of taxes and it impact all over our business.
On the other hand, The improvement of the goods require advanced technology. In other words, maintaining the quality of local items which is reasonable and has life time grantee, warranty. To make local products popular in country advertising has a key role. Generally, people do not even know that the stuff they want is available in their country.
To concluded, People look for comfort and they are affected by advancement. Despite the dangers and risks, the utility of nuclear technology clearly outweighs any drawbacks. If people continue paying for products online that will raise unemployment level in home country. It would be great idea, if government make some schemes which is basically for local organisations and companies that will difinitly affect.
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- Lots of people copy the famous people they see on TV Why do they do this Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
... provide solution, how can we encourage to spend money on their countrys goods. First...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... For another example, china is known as a advance and developing country about te...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
... government in the form of taxes and it impact all over our business. On the other ...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...local items which is reasonable and has life time grantee, warranty. To make local produc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1156462585 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59178316941 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8530539267 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151307263997 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503753144338 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427708320635 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844111511934 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492144186173 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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