Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
University and College provide better study material way to the success. Said by some, However, some people thought that getting a job right after the school is good option. I think that University or College has better future. Nevertheless, In this essay we will discuss both sides.
Firstly, University and College give us the essential degree, which is the basic requirement for a job and also a great place to gain experience and adapt knowledge. Generally, University or College is much different from the school and universities have better educational system. For instantiate, Big class room, Experienced professor and Advanced teaching system via computer, Practicals also held for students. In other words, University make a student capable and enhance their skills. There would be less opportunity after schooling because lack education, hesitation, not feeling comfortable and less confident.
On the other hand, Doing a job after completed high school. To learn few skills, employment is the best way. For example, He starts doing job in a restaurant as dish washer by spending a lot of time in the kitchen he became interested in cooking. Although He does not even have a degree. Moreover, He becomes the chef last month and earning good amount. In other words, some work need only skills not your degree.
To sum up, University make a person strong, In the sense of communication. In spite of a job after plus two develop skills. In my opinion, I would prefer for further study there are more benefits. Obviously, a company would hire a well educated person, So we can clearly see that after schooling getting a job is very difficult because we do not have enough knowledge to gain, that courses are made.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...itchen he became interested in cooking. Although He does not even have a degree. Moreove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, i think, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74371277696 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8456749668 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9473684211 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296591926991 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853984307129 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658356089851 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180388111389 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930882280018 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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