In what ways new technology have helped to maintain our traditions.
Modern Technology has created a huge impact in our life. Technology is teaching us different ways to maintain our traditions. It also helps us to reconnect with our self with the help of traditions which we have almost forgotten.
Generally, due to daily busy life style and modernisation we have almost forgot our traditional ways. But new Technology has also provided many ways to connect and understand it deeply. Now, we can check on internet and learn the exact reasons, why we need to follow our traditions. We can also share our knowledge with our elders and children’s and tell them more about it. For instance, after my grandmother died I asked my aunty to tell me some traditions and give me some reasons why we follow them, but she couldn’t. After that I learned about them through internet.
Moreover, whenever there is a festival and as a working person we are living alone away from them we can stay connected with our elders through Modern technology and learn and enjoy our traditions with them. If due to certain circumstances after family and friends are not available and we want to clear our doubts regarding some traditions, we can check online such as on youtube and on other sites.
Therefore, I totally agree to the fact that an advanced technology have helped us to connect not only our traditions but others as well and helps us to understand the speciality of every traditions and taught us how we can connect and respect all of them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78823529412 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69193906835 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6619568266 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319668479401 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13465096963 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935526150176 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231022874398 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109918744863 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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