When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Selecting a job is significant for everyone because people would spend a huge amount of time working in their life. I agree that how much you can earn from a job is important, while there are many other factors that job seekers need to think about.
In my opinion, a good salary is one of the most attracting reasons why people choose certain jobs. The decent income would release financial burdens on people’s shoulder and cover people’s basic needs, such as housing, bills and groceries. For example, thousands of young people want to work as a doctor due to the size of salary allows them to improve their living standards and lead an affluent life. By contrast, without enough incomes, employees may find it hard to support themselves and raise a family. Under such circumstances, people would feel tired of their jobs sooner or later and will not stay long in their company.
On the other hand, I believe that there are three main aspects are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, job hunters normally care about if the job has many potential opportunities to achieve their career goals in the future. For some people, professional achievement, rather than the money they earn, is a stimulus to work hard and devote their time and energy to companies. Secondly, the working environment, such as how comfortable the office is, influences people’s decision making. Finally, relationships with supervisors and colleagues make a huge difference because this is what impact on workers’ level of happiness every workday.
In conclusion, there are a variety of factors that people need to consider when they face a job selection and the salary is only one of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94405594406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67260980519 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.2169180887 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161642919825 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534536585341 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506342683159 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101845014034 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237273391998 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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