When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
choosing a job after graduating from universities is the most vital choice that everyone should decide. many people believe that salaries are the most important aspect while a person want to work in a company. this essay will discuss the reasons why I think that there are still another aspect that we must consider when we are choosing our job.
To begin with, having a good leader is really crucial part that we should consider about. i believe that if we have a good boss, we can learn many things. For instance, we can learn how to solve some daily problems which we will face in our daily life. such as human error and mechanical problem. Secondly, we can learn about passion. these days, we should know how to keep our spirit high. i believe that this trend will be helpful for us to become familiar with failure.
Second of all, i also believe that a good environment and friend are important aspect that we must consider. Nowadays, communication and socialization between employees are the most vital things that will make us become convenient with our work. in these days, people tend to resign from their jobs because that did not have a friend and they are also feel inconvenient with their surroundings. So, i absolutely believe that friends and environment need to be consider when people want to choose their company.
To sum up, I believe that there are still a lot of considerations that we need to consider when we want to choose our jobs. such as having a good leader, friends, and environment.
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- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72932330827 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52669617616 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511278195489 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.568726145 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126895551205 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456565285303 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530719030742 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104746114761 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762895368942 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.