When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently, job seekers consider many factors when chasing a career. Among those factors, a "dream" income ranks highest. While a "dream" income is certainly a factor when choosing a career, I believe that there are other aspects affecting humanity that should be considered before monetary compensation.
On the one hand, salary help person to have a good standard of living and provides strong motivation to keep up working. For instance, we use the monthly wages to pay for human’s basic need such as housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Earning is taken into account because that allows people to have a good quality of life which drive them to focus on the job recently instead of splitting their time to do secondary employment for monetary.
On the other hand, there two other factors which you consider to be extremely important. Firstly, job satisfaction plays an integral role when choosing a job. If someone decides to take any profession that they not really into, probably they would have to struggle with boredom daily. Moreover, when people do their favorite jobs, it might inspire them to think outside of the box and show up all of their strong points in order that they complete their tasks quickly. Secondly, the contribution that the work makes towards the society is another important reason to consider a job. This could be because it brings a much more cilivizated society. For example, Mr. Bruno, who used to work in US army, voluntarily teach English for poor children in My Lai village, meanwhile, he turns down teaching invitation with a lucrative income at famous English centers in Quang Ngai.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that money can be an important factor to select prospective employment, but this is by no means the key consideration for everybody making a career decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... chasing a career. Among those factors, a 'dream' income ranks highest....
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...dream' income ranks highest. While a 'dream' income is certainly a...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11803278689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83445609595 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662295081967 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.219504205 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130127774366 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464457940663 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512726170254 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675660142607 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314443619234 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.