When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly argued by some that salary plays an integral part when selecting a career. Whereas there are persuasive arguments to the contrary, it is my personal belief that other factors are equally important. The justifications for this are as follows.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why salary is considered by many as the most essential factor. To embark on, during this contemporary world, cost of living has increased, meaning that many people have to apply for a job in which they earn a competitive salary to meet their basic needs. For instance, we all need money to pay for housing, electricity bills, healthcare, education, food, etc. If workers opt for a job based on enjoyment or non-financial factors, they will find it difficult to support themselves. A salient example is that many musicians and artists are known for choosing a career path they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to lead a fulfilling life and raise their family.
On the other hand, I believe that other considerations are just as important. Firstly, working environment seems to be highlighted in the requirement of many job seekers. For example, having a sympathetic manager or supportive work colleagues would definitely make a significant contribution to employees’ level of happiness, which results in better labor productivity. On top of that, for those who adore freedom and outdoor activities, they cannot stand repeating the same boring routine of a desk job such as that in a bank even though that vacancy is offered an extremely high pay package in the job market. Secondly, job satisfaction is also a matter that many people are concerned about. In other words, instead of working for a repetitive company in the city, some opt to move to rural areas and conduct charity activities to assist the locals. Despite earning a relatively small amount of money, they are still satisfied with their contributions to the society.
By way of conclusion, while money does affect people’s choice of profession, this is by no means a critical consideration for everyone in making a career decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03966005666 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92290878097 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620396600567 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7085596065 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1875 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102824433294 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337520139669 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309691069896 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589122048442 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017170701928 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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