When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People’s priority of choosing job is salary which companies offered. Personally, I do not agree with this view that people should pay attention other important factors of choosing a job since they must feel enthusiasm when they are working.
On the one hand, salary is important factor of living in a good position. For example, people’s daily needs require finding a money for renting a house, food consumption, education, health care, raising children and others. In other words, finding a lot of money can improve quality of life. Even though, artist and singer can find enough money to cover their needs, do not even love their job, but being a famous person may also cover their happiness.
However, only think about a salary leads to lose people’s curiosity in work. Firstly, friendly relationship in colleagues and company’s atmosphere is important as finding a money. In addition, people can get enjoyment in their workplace as get it in their personal life. Secondly, when people feel a satisfaction in their job, they are able to show their ability and they become successful in their career but they do not feel any interest, they have to only work without happiness. In some cases, people should choose their career which they can attributed to develop their society.
To conclude, salary has main role while choosing a career, but other factors like getting a motivation in their work are also important.
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- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
People’s priority of choosing job is salary which companies offered. Pers...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...feel enthusiasm when they are working. On the one hand, salary is important fac...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...e, people’s daily needs require finding a money for renting a house, food consumption, ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...person may also cover their happiness. However, only think about a salary lead...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
...ny’s atmosphere is important as finding a money. In addition, people can get enjoyment ...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'attribute'
Suggestion: attribute
...ould choose their career which they can attributed to develop their society. ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... attributed to develop their society. To conclude, salary has main role while...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... like getting a motivation in their work are also important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09745762712 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60604932905 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1891088157 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.25 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156755435108 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677937004353 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631835714005 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119326593758 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803819697058 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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