When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At present, employees of different ages are engaged in different job sectors and give the salary more or less priority according to their interest. Though salary is considered to be foremost, there are some other requirements that are needed to be considered for self benefits.
Salary is considered to be the most important by a greater number of people due to their fundamental, financial and luxury needs. For example, money means everything to the person from the poor background. It is because it could provide the basic needs like food, education, cloths and accommodation to their unprivileged family. In addition, a person wanted the money the most because of the financial security for his family in the future. Furthermore, it is thought by some people that a decent and comfortable life can be lead through higher income.
There are many employees who give importance to many other things rather than salary due to their pleasure. For example, most of the employees seek for a certain job section that could give them satisfaction. Besides, some look for the opportunities to build up their future career path. In addition, transportation is taken as a special consideration mainly by the female workers. Furthermore, the colleague behaviour, working environment and safety concerns are seen to be mostly considered among the workers.
In conclusion, other desires are needed to be equally considered to salary during job seeking. The fulfillment of the requirements may encourage and motivate workers to be more active and dedicated on their work field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26587301587 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97121011865 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.1586817272 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110619292296 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398540130829 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408696006475 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720566316251 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109894003633 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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