You are moving to a new country, write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house.
In your letter, describe:
• yourself and your family
• which area you would like to live in
• and what facilities you need in the house
Dear Sir:
Good Day.
I am writing this letter in order to inform you that I am moving to India next month. I have already communicated with your local agent about the accommodation and they have advised me to contact with you.
I am currently working as a banker in a multinational bank. The Company has decided to make me a regional manager of Delhi. To shift there they have given me a month time. Within this short period I am quite doubtful about finding a proper residence to accommodate my wife and baby girl. My office will be at central point of Delhi. However, I need a calm place to live in but not so far away from my office.
In Bangladesh, I am living in an apartment where I have got 24 hours security service. The water and gas supply is uninterrupted. There is geyser and bathtub facility at the washroom. Now as I am shifting in India with my family I will be needed the same facilities accordingly. I will be needed 2 rooms. Another thing is, I need the house/apartment to be fully furnished. I can afford INR 27000/month.
I have heard that your company has a reputation to serve clients with a very positive feedback. I am looking forward to get reply from you soon.
Regards,
Rafiur Rahman.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... have advised me to contact with you. I am currently working as a banker in a m...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rnished. I can afford INR 27000/month. I have heard that your company has a rep...
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Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... clients with a very positive feedback. I am looking forward to get reply from yo...
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Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...positive feedback. I am looking forward to get reply from you soon. Regards, Rafiu...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to get reply from you soon. Regards, Rafiur Rahman.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, look, so, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48430493274 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76269580038 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2791512524 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.6315789474 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7368421053 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.94845360825 355% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167260781315 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406827918903 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496228485519 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110737219511 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692443155673 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.52 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.