You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house
In your letter describe
Yourself and your family
Which area you would like to live in
And what facilities you need in the house.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to enquire about, a house for rent. As, I have been personally recommended by a friend about your superior quality service. Hence, I would request to suggest a house for me, as per the requirement stated below.
I am a young doctor, who will be immigrating along with my wife in the first week of July 2020. As, I will be practising in Healthcare hospital, Carlton road, Toronto. It would be preferred if the house is near to the hospital.
Furthermore, I have a short list of features that the apartment should have. Firstly, fully-furnished, as i will be new to the place and look to quickly settle in. Another is, one bedroom on 10th floor or above with north facing window. However, I am open to suggestions.
Hope, you will get back with the best match within a reasonable price.
Please feel free to contact me on the mobile number given below.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ter to enquire about, a house for rent. As, I have been personally recommended by ...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ould have. Firstly, fully-furnished, as i will be new to the place and look to qu...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best match within a reasonable price. Please feel free to contact me on the mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.675 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73815631402 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.4764606204 44.8134815571 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135120373769 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426857409552 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529764978191 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614523938244 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623312864574 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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