When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When architects design buildings, a reconciliation between outside looks and functions should be a top priority. Many recommend that purposes of a building rather than its outward form. In my opinion, I strongly agree with that idea even though appearance is important in many aspects.
A usage of a building is probably the most basis function of how that building performs or it is literally a failed project, and in several circumstances, an appropriate design can be based on a building’s using purposes. For example, multiple universities have been constructed supported by certain locations or measurements of other figures such as population, weather, materials and so forth. A foremost goal of building universities is to deal well with educational systems that effectively matches with a performance should be more appreciated by how gorgeous they look externally.
However, an appearance also plays an essential role of making the surroundings look exquisite in general. Architecture is considered a part of art and represent for a development of those locations in a further perspective, it has become one of factors to determine living standard and relevant criteria such as economic situation, speed of development, culture and so on. For instance, a full-glasses skyscraper with a solid square design can express how modern a city it locates in.
In short, a performance of a building and its design must be integrated altogether; specifically, the intended use of a building must be significantly prioritized. It is apparent that it would consume more efforts, finance and time for achieving the job.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in general, in short, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37647058824 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36162389129 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.265894754 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.636363636 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185721404532 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673034208636 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739247022089 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112860046005 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617784612605 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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