Whether or not a person achieve their aims in life is mostly related to Luck To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Whether or not a person achieve their aims in life is mostly related to Luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The modern generation is ignoring the hard work and determination behind the success of individuals. Many people attribute the success and failure of each person to luck. In this essay, I will argue why I completely disagree with the notion of everyone's fate is decided by the only factor “Luck”.
According to some people, Luck has become an important factor in procuring success. Some personalities have shown greater progress in their life without trying hard for it but somehow luck favored them to reach their destination. In the modern era of social media, Luck alone can do wonders in exceptional cases to get into the limelight without striving hard. Famous Pakistani artist Dananeer, for instance, has gained popularity on social media with her 5 seconds video. After her viral clip, she availed opportunities in many ads and TV shows without appearing for any audition. Due to the fact, these rare cases have led many people to believe that luck has a crucial role in determining success more than other factors.
Despite playing a tiny role in success, luck cannot outcompete hard work with consistency. It is strongly believed that your fate and destination entirely depend on the efforts you put in to achieve it. Most people who have procured their goals and targets, attribute their success to the consistent hard work that they have done in the past. Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi, the two greatest athletes, have stipulated numerous times in interviews that failures never let them down on the road to success due to their strong belief in hard work. These success stories have bolstered motivation in many people including me to believe that success relies on hard work and consistency more than luck.
This essay argued that people who prioritize luck over other factors behind the achievement of big goals have flawed understandings of success. I opine that consistency in hard work makes you capable to achieve the success you have dreamt of.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06461538462 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6291150895 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572307692308 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.862029158 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158434222632 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583058784758 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449561453562 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105136463722 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104680584209 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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