While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment. Others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
In recent years, the environment has become a broad issue for the world. Some people believe that global warming is one of the most serious threats that the world is facing today. however, others think that deforestation degrades ecosystems on the planet. In my opinion, I agree with the former idea. Discussed below are several reasons supporting my perspective.
On the one hand, there are several arguments in support of the idea that deforestation seriously affects the environment. it is widely known that trees help absorb carbon dioxide in the air to reduce the impact of climate change. however, logging trees are disappearing the balance of ecosystems and depleting natural resources as well as affecting the habitat of a variety of animals, which leads to are on the brink of extinction. According to FAO, deforestation increased sharply in Africa, where it must be confronted with droughts every year.
On the other hand, I believe that there are more drawbacks to global warming. The first explanation is that the deterioration of environmental quality affects one's health. Take Vietnam as an example, this is a country that uses many means of transportation. this means that exhaust fumes from vehicles are also one of the causes of global warming. As a result, humans must face a constant threat of disease such as cancer with access to environmental pollution. Another point I would like to make is that over-exploitation of fossil fuels generates carbon footprints, which leads to the greenhouse effect.
In conclusion, various factors are leading to global warming and deforestation. In my opinion, I put more emphasis on the idea that global warming created threats around the world. Therefore, people should use renewable energy to ameliorate the impact of environmental contamination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3598615917 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03155264158 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7373661767 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0555555556 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232251006317 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666949162719 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602235698369 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14128915599 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567397760613 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.