Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitude of people and there is little can be done to rectify this.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In some countries around the world the media has high position among most basic needs. As well as you can observe the conflicts between the government and the other cults which indicate to the importance of the media. Controlling media means having best method to make your opinion prevailing.
Whoever controls the media can have long range for making his thoughts go wherever he wants with both sides' negative or positive and targeting people who rely totally on the media for getting news and learning things belong them. Publishing in this case is the best way to make all your messages arrive for most targeting people. As well as the TV that is considered as perfect way and less losing for money in this purpose.
On the other side, the media broadly might confronts critical people or those who don't change their beliefs easily. In addition, people who have their own idea you can't control them, beside they seem like the obstacle in front of the media. Furthermore, the media will suffer from campaigns that sometimes fight some programs of the media. In this case. It is not easy to use the media as way to change people's viewpoint.
My overall opinion is that telling the government that controlling the media would rather be as critical point of the life in any country especially if this gun fall in the wrong hand. For instance, if government use the media for developing essential needs and spreading the awareness among people to avoid most hazardous problems, they will take the large portion of the benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83650190114 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36377774818 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9819286142 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236669534555 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871679502591 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470680817085 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148173355028 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018399432853 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.