Why children rebel against their parents
The relationship between parents and their kids must be the strongest bond; however, it is not usually like that. Sometime children are rebellious against their parents because of some different reasons.
The first reason is the children’s changes during puberty period. In this period, apart from physical development, children also go through psychological, social and emotional changes. These tremendous changes make them become oversensitive, irritated, angry, confused and lost. In this sensitive time, kids always assert their opinion and want to be independent; nonetheless, their parents are always overprotective and want to control over their children’s actions. As a result, there are conflicts between them. According to a study conducted by National Institute of Researching Society, 90 percent of adolescence conflict with their children in this phase of their life.
Another cause is high expectation of parents about what their kids will be. Parents always have dreams of their children’s success which puts more pressure on their children. In particular, they want their kids to have good manners and get high grades at schools or achieve a qualification which the children do not like. Consequently, the kids trend to oppose against their parents. For example, when a kid want to become a teacher but their parents push them to take part in Medical University, the child will rebel by not attending classes.
The last cause is seeking for attention of their parents. Indeed, currently most parents are busy with their own career so they do not spend a lot of time on taking care of their children. This makes kids feel lonely and vulnerable, thus they rebel against their parents to be looked after more. Mr. John Smith, a professor in Psychology department of Harvard University revealed that 65 percent of rebellious teenagers result from lack of their parents’ attention.
In conclusion, there are some main causes of children’s rebellion against their parents including changes during adolescence, high expectation of parents about their children and drawing parents’ attention. From my perspective, parents should listen to their opinion to sympathize them more and spend more time for them to prevent from unwanted conflicts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29261363636 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66739276847 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 352.0 20.2975951904 1734% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1863.0 106.682146367 1746% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 352.0 20.7667163134 1695% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 140.0 7.06120827912 1983% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487865168847 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.487865168847 0.084324248473 579% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332716515883 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561248104062 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 179.5 13.0946893788 1371% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -285.8 50.2224549098 -569% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 140.6 11.3001002004 1244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.59 8.58950901804 286% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 142.8 10.1190380762 1411% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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