Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? Many of us ask themselves about what is more primary a country music or the international music, which is a very popular everywhere now. Try to answer this question let is turn to practical monitoring.
At the first music is a thing, which leads us across all our life. When you are a child your mother sing some lullabies’ for you, then you have a first kiss to the some romantic rock ballad and so on. This example shows that music is a part of history, but not only separation person’s history. In a global understanding, this is a part of civilization’s history. For instance, you can hear the one or another music style in a movie and clearly image what the century it is.
On the other hand, the problem of country music importance understanding. Nowadays, the Youngers often forget their historical roots and try to erase sides, which make them to one or another nationality. However, we observe positive changes in that way. For instance, popular artists use some native country tunes as a melody in their songs to connect it with modern rhythms. Furthermore, the parents have to introduce a new generation with a country music and explain a uniqueness of the sort of music it is.
In the conclusion, I think music is a great present of Space to Humanity. We should appreciate the one in all kind of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... you, then you have a first kiss to the some romantic rock ballad and so on. This ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74708171206 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97245195679 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.617707587 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493610505792 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173679639479 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.222874641354 0.0667982634062 334% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298017136857 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.252287008125 0.056905535591 443% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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