the widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? what solutions can you suggest?
It is believed that the advent of websites and the Internet has facilitated our life, however, it also creates a lot of disadvantages. From my point of view, the two biggest problems, which could affect our daily life dramatically, is Internet addiction and cybercrime.
First of all, the term “Internet addiction” indicates people who are addicted to the Internet and could not function normally without checking their mobile phone or computer. Furthermore, this disorder is a new term that only became well-known after the blooming of the Internet from 2000 to now. Subsequently, those who suffered from IDD tend to not have a balanced relationship with friends, partners or families. For example, in Japan, there is another term called “NEET” for people who spent most of their lifetime on the Internet and never get out of their room, which caused by the Internet. The second problem that is mentioned is cybercrime, a crime that once again happened due to the development of websites. Since everyone thinks they are safe behind the screen, it has led to a gradual increase in frauds, cyberbullies, piracy, etc. As a result, many suicidal victims and bankruptcy companies are caused by cybercrime.
Regard the solutions, the governments should have better policies to protect the Internet user as well as to punish the criminal. For example, instead of track down individuals in music piracy, the government should tackle the supplier such as the website owner provide illegal music download services. Additionally, there should be certain propaganda and education course about the negative side of the Internet to reduce the ability to be addicted and becoming a victim.
In conclusion, even though the Internet plays an important role in our daily life, it still has many drawbacks that need to tackle such as addiction and cybercrime. Hence, the government should implement certain special rules and laws to protect the users and the companies
- Some people argue that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to a boarding school others suggest that children live with their families and attend a day school What is your opinion 56
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- How should we ensure that the television is a positive influence in the life of children 78
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- The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence crime Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, still, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22784810127 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83993202525 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.783498674 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0827845285236 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281603151755 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152613286556 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445441372871 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240718788419 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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