Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays, although many countries are trying their best to conserve endangered animals, many people argue that it is merely a fruitless effort to invest in the protection of wild animals because we have no place for them. Personally, I strongly disagree with this point of view.
Firstly, it is nonsense that animals have no place on the earth. we may be at the top of the food chain but it does not mean that we have the rights to decide whether other animals can stay or not. it would be such a cruel and selfish thought if someone argue that way. Moreover, we are living in an ecosystem where every species is dependent on others. if we let wild animals die out, our ecosystem will be imbalanced and could not fully develop.
Secondly, protecting wild animals is definitely not a waste of resources. The act of conserving them involves preserves their habitats such as forest. Since forest helps to moderate climate and trees produce oxygen and absorb carbon dioxide, we can deduce that protecting wild animals is crucial for our survival. By protecting animals and their habitats, we would keep up natural balance on earth.
In conclusion, animals will always have place on the earth regardless of time, and we have to try our best to protect them for our good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: We
...hat animals have no place on the earth. we may be at the top of the food chain but...
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Suggestion: It
... whether other animals can stay or not. it would be such a cruel and selfish thoug...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... a cruel and selfish thought if someone argue that way. Moreover, we are living in an...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...e every species is dependent on others. if we let wild animals die out, our ecosys...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48710768432 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0462981186 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310482897222 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121599637244 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105719375243 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197344200453 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374387403123 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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