Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Penalizing the crime is vital to control and deter the act of offence. Some people state that capital punishment makes our life more secure by reducing crime rates. In my opinion, death penalty is not paramount factor to diminish crimes lonely in society and other measures should be taken.
On the one hand, capital punishment is not so deterrent to avoid new crimes. Although, death sentence is one of the strongest penalty to control violence from ancient times to our ages, crime has never disappeared yet. For example, the countries which execute death penalty such as Iran and China have higher crime rates than many other western countries which has left the discipline method people paying with their lives. Thus, death penalty cannot solve the root of the wrong-doing in communities.
Moreover, punishment has not ability to get rid of the offencing behaviours and secure the civils. Because of that tackling with the main source of crime should be the main point in this battle. Security measurement including education and promoting peace within the public should be taken. For instance, in Sweden, which has highest education levels in the world, the capital punishment has prohibited but it has lowest the offence rates in the world. Therefore rather than executing death penalty,rising education levels and taking other measruments would be the first step to build a secure society.
To sum up, neverthless the capital punishment might be an essential and strongest way of punishment to deter crime, it hasn't halted all crime in many countries. I belive that increasing public awarenes about crime by educating people may be best solution to settle a secure community and decrease violence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19494584838 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59562519108 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0036628317 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.785714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315789950426 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102398846545 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523983555806 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189508689515 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338180376918 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.