Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I think capital punishment is a really serious punishment. I am not really sure if it is a good idea to end someones life because of the crime they comitted. But i also think there are serious crimes that should be punished more than arresting and putting them in prison. Such as types of murder, child abuse and terrorism.
There are psychopaths that can not regret anything they have done. Prisons will not be enough for psychopats because when they are released from prison they can commit any crime again. If any of these people are not punished with death then we can say that our live is less secure. But i can not say that i am supporting capital punishment. Because i have doubts if it is ethic or not. Maybe there are any other ways to control violence. But also i agree that capital punishment decrease the number of violence. Idea of dying if you commit any of these crimes, makes people to stop. Therefore it will be safer if some of those criminals punished with capital punishment.
There are also bad sides of capital punishment. Because maybe some innocents would be punished with death. I mean there are people had dyed to capital punishment even though they were innocent in the past. Basically despite the fact that some people deserve capital punishment i am not certainly supporting the death penalty at all. Maybe people should not be punished with death i suppose. There should be any other ways to punish them such as sentence to life imprisonment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, i mean, i suppose, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68846153846 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4530472536 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488461538462 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.807290502 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.1578947368 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6842105263 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255073056288 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886615312866 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673214413763 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177500085184 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450714744991 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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