In some societies, stress is now regarded as a major problem, and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past.
However, others feel that the amount of stress people have today is exaggerated. They say that the previous generations were under more pressure, but the idea of suffering from stress did not exist.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The impression I have is that in the past people were not aware of mental problems such as stress. It is not really like there is a decrease in people who suffer from stress, but it is more like people are now more aware of it.
Probably in the past people had more time to do things. But today time is a big problem. Therefore, pace is a thing in our lives today. People are always in a hurry which is playing a big role in why people are stressed. I do not think that stress is exaggerated today. I think stress is real and always been real, but people have not realized it as much as people do in our generations.
I do not agree that previous generations were under more pressure, I agree that life was a lot harder back then, for example now we have so many vehicles, computers, virtual assistants, machines etc. but in the past, people had to do most of the things by hand since there were not machines and stuff. And because of that, it was taking a lot longer than it does now. However, it does not mean that they were under more pressure. I guess it did not matter how hard life was, they were still happy and they had no idea of suffering from stress. Previous generations accepted the life the way it is and they continued being happy that way. Today it is much more complicated. Now we do not let anything shut us from defending our rights, our matters. In the past life was harder but they did not mind it. Today people overthink, they stand against some strict rules, they do not know how to be happy with little things and how to not worry about things that they can not control.
In my opinion, stress has always been a problem, but it was not a major problem in the past because people did not complain. Today our generation complains about nearly everything so they make others and themselves sad. Also, now we are more focused on mental issues and stress because we are aware of how it can affect our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ch as people do in our generations. I do not agree that previous generations ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, therefore, for example, i guess, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3095890411 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24044268204 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452054794521 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5099161434 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9047619048 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.380952381 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430935365434 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133097170268 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748477897816 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286604753267 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372780103427 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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