Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
I agree that happiness is very important in life and it has impacts on our lives. Unfortunately, it might not be easy to achieve happiness in some situations and positions in life.
Nowadays the vast majority of people suffer from depression, but it does not mean that they cannot achieve happiness. People have a tendency to get sad over things that they cannot control which is a big issue in a way for happiness. However, there is always a way out from the dark, deep, and depressed phases, even though it looks like the end of the world, there is no way out and it can be felt like the worst version of life, yet that is so not true. From my point of view, it is just a phase and in the result, people will come through it even if it might take such a long time.
Happiness is hard to define because it depends on the person, their personality, lifestyle, point of view and many more. If it was asked to people the “what is happiness” question, each person’s answer would differ from each other. The people from the same age group, same culture, and the same goals in life would have a similar definition of happiness. Also, there are triggers for happiness just like in sadness related to our life goals, dreams, satisfactions also perceived productivity and the other factors. Some people might not find joy in almost anything, while for some it can be easy to find happiness in small things. For instance, to some people eating ice cream would be plenty of reason to be happy, while for some, it could be not satisfying enough.
In conclusion, happiness depends on living conditions and can be varying. The reasons to be happy and the meaning of happiness could be different for every person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 742, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...n to be happy, while for some, it could be not satisfying enough. In conclusion, happiness dep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58631921824 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51125489127 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527687296417 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1112662889 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20480141126 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880483776883 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928412131343 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166934973295 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12412501338 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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