Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
I strongly agree that international sporting occasions are very important. Additionally, it does improve international tensions.
International sports events and the World Cup do affect international relations in a good way. Which means that international sports events are essential for more positive vibes in international relationships. For instance, the football World Cup is held all over the world every 4 years. It always holds in a different country and that causes different types of celebrations, events, organizations. These differences bring along different traditions and cultures. Including all types of celebration and entertainment styles from all countries. More specifically people can learn each other’s culture easily in that way and would enjoy it.
From my point of view, it is obvious that international sports events cause positivity and help people to forget at least for an hour all the negativity and bad stuff going around the world. That makes international sports events an important need. Different people, different countries, different celebrities, etc. that all help people to understand more about other countries and have a worldwide view. It also affects politics and economy since the country who holds the organization spends too much money and also gains money which causes an impact on the country’s outlook and gives a new image, moreover the country will be known more than they used to do all over the world. However, there might be some negative effects on the host county such as price inflation, security, and crime concern, risk of disease.
In conclusion, worldwide sport events are important so much since they do good in many ways and advantages overweight the disadvantages to the host country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44688644689 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05845232215 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8215408098 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266954735459 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101865029645 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109662410851 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173605342772 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809086433793 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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