Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Some people wonder whether happiness is essential for humans in the modern days. It is hard to describe the personal nature of happiness because of depending on the individual’s opinions and there are some factors that influence the ways they could get them.
Hardly does it find out many standard cases which always make almost all everybody happy in their life but there are some ways can be given to make a human be happy by themselves. First of all, they could do what they would like to do such as doing their habits in daily life, buying their favorite goods, gossiping with their close relationship. Also, this seems to be a reward they give by themselves after hard-working hours or when they are exhausted. For instance, when working hard for a long time, they may book a ticket to travel abroad on a short-day trip if they are still living alone or they should spend lots of time taking care of their family members. Furthermore, many individuals reach the same feelings derived from a sense of earning numerous money or achieving their success. They could last their happiness by buying a new house in a secure area or eating much more delicious food than normal daily dishes, which are proud of themselves and promotes their enthusiasm to keep going their businesses.
On the other hand, other people could get happiness in easier ways. They wish they could have all of the basic survival necessities in their whole life. To give a clear example, the poor in the world, especially the children in Africa, it would be hard to be happy if they do not have enough food to eat, which leads to them suffering empty stomachs almost every time in a day. More importantly, they hope they still have an adequate family after the COVID-19 pandemic that has occurred on over the world and stolen many and many people’s life. They are ready to trade all of the things they have, provided that they could see their close members. This is simple happiness but it is a pity that it did not happen to them. In addition, they would like to share others’ difficult situations or see others’ smiles while helping many homeless people or the poor around their living areas. The rich in Vietnam, for example, support a number of huge finance for the orphans, who do not have any close people during the current pandemic, in order to cover their upcoming difficult life.
It is difficult to define what happiness is and does not have any typical cases or specific factors on how to get this emotion because it is particular to each individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... people’s life. They are ready to trade all of the things they have, provided that they co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69798657718 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39931608284 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514541387025 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9501357938 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.529411765 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2941176471 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138250788422 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586018612761 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516008699828 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123567544267 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511895011879 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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