Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, some people believe that in tertiary steps of education institute ought to provide a same number of seats in each subject according to gender instead of merit. I strongly disagree with this essay and I will depict this opinion with example.
On the one hand, If students can not choose their subject according to their choice they will hinder their interest to learn. Selecting subject by gender in every subject would be detrimental for students career and they may be leaving their institute because of pressure to read unchoosable subject. For instance, take Japan as an example, they started a rule just a few years ago that universities had chosen girls and boys equal for each subject. Therefore, almost 50% of students had left their study and when administration investigates the reason they found that students do not want to study any subject by the choice of their institute. So, Japan government had to change this rule for the betterment of their students.
On the other hand, students need to get their subject regarding their merit and by their capability. At the view of this point, learning capacity varies from student to student and all students are not good at in all subjects at the same time such as some students are good at science and some are good at arts. For example, the research found that girls are 60% better than boys in nursing while boys are staying ahead in engineering. As a result, without harmful ,effect this way has no significance on students study life.
In conclusion, rather than discrimination by gender educational institutes should choose students subjects based on their merit. It would be the best way for continuing their further study and for choosing a handsome career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96575342466 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61079323599 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9788619673 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164640992004 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594407555717 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422505567397 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947200683535 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293306547485 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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