Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. It is right to exclude males and females from certain professions because of their gender?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience
There are a common believe that different gender has different ability to do some work or job. Because of that, many countries are not accept to let males and females do some certain profession because of their sex. From my perspective, I strongly disagree about it and the reason for my opinion will be discussed in next paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many reason why a lot of people think that certain gender should do specific works. The most evidential ones is that they believe men should do strong and heavy work while women are believed to be home appliances or doing some gently job. Moreover, women are said to be the vulnerable people so if they do heavy work, they can be hurt.
On contrast, my opinion is different. Although women are vulnerable, they can do as well as men in many professions. It is because when people practice and put effort to do their work, it will be achievable. Their efforts and struggle can overweight their weaknesses so that they can do almost everything. For instance there are a lo t of polices are women and there also a lot of wealthy and successful businesswomen .Furthermore, the same thing goes with men, in the past most home appliances are women but now, men also share responsibility to take care of their home with women. Compared to the past, men did not normally do nursin and midwives as they are now.
On the whole, those are reasons for why I strongly believe that we should not prevent some people from certain work because of their gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66417910448 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57287416006 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503731343284 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.467187886 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195134441025 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779083202696 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555707445872 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149150047132 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649995695313 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.