The working week should be shorter and workers should have longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is obvious that people need to relax during their work period. According to some, believe time work should be short and they have a longer weekend, while some else do not think so. I strongly agree with the first opinion and in the following give you some information about my decision.
On the one hand, people should have enough time to spend their time with their families and a very good plan for their work. Not only can this make to more focus of people on their careers and the high rate of exploitation but it also, gives a sense of satisfaction from their employees. For instance, in Japan, employees have to relax during their work and have about four days weekend which leads to an improvement in their economy. Hence, it is necessary to have enough time to devote it spending with your family. But time off should not be longer than usual because the mood of people will change and they don’t have to go back to work.
On the other hand, the government can legislate that every organization should have an obligatory sports day for its members to play their favorite sports game. This reduces the stress on members of staff because of challenges in their work and gives peace of mind. In addition, when a company provides such a facility, their workers ensure the company pays good attention to them. Thus, they try their performance gets better and all do their best to provide the task of the company. When you don’t have enough time off you cannot have perfect concentration on your work and this makes a bad effect on your performance.
In conclusion, in every country, you have to have enough weekend days to relax, recharge, and spend your time with your family which leads to more focus and performance at work and better outcomes.
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- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compariso
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65064102564 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.344609885 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503205128205 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1028853789 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266673495899 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984119420474 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791478815866 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183310160591 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545258628021 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.