When new towns are planned, it is more important to pay attention to the construction of public parks and sports facilities rather than shopping centers. To hat extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is said that when making decisions about the design of new towns, the building of public parks and sports facilities is priority to shopping centers. I believe that consideration all of them based on the circumstances and facilities is important.
On the one hand, the creation of natural places, such as parks, can be beneficial to dwellers in suburbs. Green spaces can make the view of the towns more beautiful. They can clean the air because plants can absorb pollutants as well as CO2 and release O2. Natural places like parks can be a good place for the pastime of inhabitants. People usually go there to spend time with their family members and friends. Also, for helping people’s health, in some parks, sports facilities are freely provided for doing workouts. In this way, many people are encouraged to exercise and keep their bodies fit. Additionally, the construction of well-equipped gyms managed by professional coaches is necessary to support and guide people on how to have a healthy lifestyle and to eat a balanced diet.
On the other hand, shopping malls are just as important as parks and gyms. The construction of such places should not be underestimated. People need to go shopping malls to buy their needs, even if the online shops are accessible. According to my experience, many people cannot trust online shops and still prefer to go shopping centres to see their product considered and test and touch it. Shopping malls are one of the most important commercial centres of each town because these places are job creations for the local people, and in addition to the purchase, it is possible that other activities are done. For example, in my town, shopping malls have different floors, and each one is allocated to special activities, including language institutions for teaching, fusion restaurants for serving food, amusement parks for recreational activities, or the holding of conferences and big festivals.
In conclusion, in my view, the creation of shopping malls should be considered alongside the parks and sports facilities because all of are equally important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...lities is priority to shopping centers. I believe that consideration all of them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10434782609 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86696705684 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1863679777 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.588235294 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179151746066 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590279695158 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494712889338 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121317489988 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388189469219 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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