The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries but also for industrialized and developing nations.
Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.
In these years, the population is getting more and more by some reasons such as advances of technical and medical skills. It is natural phenomenon that increasing population. However, there are some dangerous factor in population expanding. In this essay, it is stated that the problems caused by overpopulation and highly expected solutions for that.
Firstly, the problem depends on the much population is divided in two, for the poor people and rich people. At first, it is focused that problems for the poor people. The issue for non-rich people is less social care. For example, in Japan, to support all residents is now impossible because of the less budgets. There are two choices for take care of all people in Japan. One is increasing taxes for more government’s income. The other is cut down the social care like making requirements to get social care hard. As a professor in American top university said, there are no choices with bright future. If Japan chose which choices, poor people will struggle for poorness.
Secondly, for the rich people, it will get more difficult to get their desired job position. In China which is the comprehensively population increasing nation, it is very hard to get suit position for applicants’ academic background and profession. There are a lot of tips to get nice job. One of it is learning through high quality education at top universities in China. For entering them, much dirt money are crossing between parents and institutes. This is not comfortable society and they can not feel happy after getting position.
Finally, the solution for the problems stated above is teach all children who are both poor and rich that to hold their own strong identity. Strong identity make people believe themselves. It can make them happier and happier even in horrible or hopeless situation.
To conclude, there are two types of problem which are for the poor and for the rich such as the less social care and the not comfortable society. For the solution, it is expected that making children to have solid identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
...tion. However, there are some dangerous factor in population expanding. In this essay,...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun budgets is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...idents is now impossible because of the less budgets. There are two choices for take...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...lution for the problems stated above is teach all children who are both poor and rich...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01734104046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75994461232 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517341040462 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4351183657 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25284050094 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779909686277 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729970568548 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149491796362 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051104271591 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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