The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the danger of this situation? What should we do?
It is true that there is the growing consumption of natural resources in many parts of the
world. This has potential problems, and we need to take actions to combat the issue.
The over exploitation of natural resources results in a number of negative effects. Chief
among them is a greater level of environmental contamination. In recent years, emissions
from traffic have increased significantly due to the growing demand for fossil fuels in the
world. This impairs the quality of life and decreases life expectancy of people. In Vietnam,
for example, a growing number of people are suffering from respiratory problems as a
result of the deterioration in the air quality. Another consequence is that the natural
resources will be dwindling shortly in near future. A possible scenario of this is that
countries may fall into a fuel war, which threatens mankind as a whole.
The situation calls for prompt actions. One measure would be that campaigns should be
continued to raise public awareness about saving energy. We can, for example, opt for
public transport whenever possible rather than relying on our private vehicles. This will
contribute to a reduction in the level of exhaust emissions released into the environment,
slowing down the progress of global warming. The second remedy is that alternative
sources of energy should be developed to reduce our dependence on fossil fuels. Solar
power, wind power and nuclear energy ought to be invested in to make them viable for
public use in the coming years.
In conclusion, an increase in the world’s demand for natural resources is posing a number
of threats to society. However, this can be handled by adopting abovementioned
suggestio
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26714801444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87641141924 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2042088259 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8235294118 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173344706301 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555022122732 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049381411075 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048060437525 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527568054364 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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