Nowadays, it is truely fact that, technology plays vital role in everyone's life. Today amusement options are provided by technology. Some people choose to watch films on their phone Or tablets, whereas others prefer to go cinema for fully enjoyment. Both the views would be taken into consideration before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
To commence with, due to technological advancement people get entertainment easily at anywhere, anytime in the world. Some individual's belive that, one can feel more comfortable to see films on their own electronic gadgets. For an instance, people also enjoy movie while travelling using their phone or tablet. In addition to this, people do not have worries about booking their seats for movie; however, excessive use of mobile phone may harm their eye sights. Thus, person may feel pleasure by watching film on their personal electronic devices, but they should take care of their eye sights.
On the other hand, some people belive that, if they want full enjoy ment then they have to go to cinema to see films. High quality sound system, large screen and visual representation attract most of the people towards theaters. For an example, some persons belive that, qualitative background music and graphical representation give them immense joy. Furthermore, watching movie in theater give people immense joy, rather than watching films on mobile phone. Therefore, some individual always go to cinema for full Amusement.
In conclusion, technology serves numerous option for enjoyment. Some proponents say that there is no need to go to cinema to see movie, they may use their phone or tablets for that and get pleasure; while others prefer cinema for full enjoyment. My solidarity goes with the fact that individuals have to choose cinema option for full amusement. I recommend people to always choose that option which gives them countless happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesights'.
Suggestion: eyesights
...sive use of mobile phone may harm their eye sights. Thus, person may feel pleasure by watc...
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Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesights'.
Suggestion: eyesights
...ces, but they should take care of their eye sights. On the other hand, some people bel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25986842105 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66571405502 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9129103239 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0184933633267 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00669682543529 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0151501396242 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0106604798485 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115041748428 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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