Write an essay to analyze some causes or effects of university students’ poor health.
There is no doubt that students’ life changes very much in university. Especially, their health tends to be worse than before studying in university. Two main causes lead to university students’ poor health: subjective and objective causes.
The subject reasons that affect college students’ health may come from their unhealthy lifestyle. Firstly, university students usually stay up too late to do other things like using social media applications, watching the film, but studying. Some studies show that the number of Vietnamese students using social networking platforms at night has increased significantly in recent years. As a result, they will feel exhausted in the next working day. Secondly, studying in a room may be considered a bad habit of tertiary students. They like to play games or sleep so much when they have the spare time instead of doing outdoor activities such as playing sports, walking, or participating in volunteer organizations. Therefore, they will have fewer opportunities to enhance their physical health and improve their immune system through these activities.
Besides, the poor health of tertiary students is also partly due to social factors. One of the first reasons is fast food, which is considered the preferred option for students who don’t have enough time to cook. However, the ready-made food may not be clean, or it contains too many additives and preservatives damaging human health. Another cause affecting students’ health is the pressure from their families. Sometimes, parents of students put too much hope into the scholarship or high-level position in class, which is a big burden for the student. Each student has their learning abilities, so they can become more stressed out day by day if they have to comply with learning requirements from their parents.
In short, university students’ poor health may be caused by both subjective and objective reasons, they should learn management skills to balance their study and relaxation as well as making healthy food choices. Moreover, let students freely develop their learning without any worry from their families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in short, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40540540541 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80552170427 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1221081388 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219132892162 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802336649359 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762800925351 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160131275443 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439477430844 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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